Anotace: vzniklo jako školní práce na téma moje budoucnost
My future
The pain only my life used to be
But a change came
As you can see
I just do not care about fame
My life has changed
What? How? Why?
Because I don’t have a reason to die
Not anymore
She opened a secret door
I am in love
She found the key
To my heart
And showed to me
That love doesn’t hurt
Only thanks to her
Everything seems just great
She is my final fate
When she is next to me
I can feel finally free
I want to with her be
Because my future is she
Yes, I should study too
And then some work I should do
But who knows what will come
It’s good to have plans some
I bet on a one card
You can say that I am not too smart
But this is of love part
She is my card
She is my queen
She is my real dream
"I want to with her be" - jestli chceš mít na konci "be", tak by bylo lepší obrátit slovosled: "with her I want to be".
"I bet on a one card" - máš-li před podstatným jménem číslovku, je neurčitý člen zbytečný.
"but this is of love part" - stejný případ jako ten první:
"but of love this is a part"
08.04.2012 08:27:26 | Hesiona-Essylt