Soulstealer
Soulstealer
Anotace: Succubus - a beautiful female demon that feeds on a soul of its victim. They do exist, and they are everywhere...
Goddamn you cycle in my head
Go back to my heart instead
Remind me what you´re waiting for
I can take no more
Please just let it go
Or my head will blow
Mark on my soul, pitiful whore
Still you are coming back for more
Goddamn you´re crowd all around me
Open your eyes don't be blind and you will see
And you still come for more
Back for more
Don't be ignorant, bore
Know what Im fighting for
Place in your mind
The only thing that's worth a fight
Goddamn you stolen my eyes, ears
Song of your voice it all day long hears
You took my smell, touch, taste
Such a waste
Why wont you just let me be
Still coming back to me
Shadow on my fingerprint
Be there for me
Goddamn you´re only thing I fear
Your name into starless night I scream
You´re a nightmare in my dreams
Stole my dreams
You are my demon and devil
steal my strength through touch of an evil
Cause me to fade in pain
Die in vain
Goddamn you´re all I want from life
Hold you tight and call you my dear wife
In this way my message is send
In the end
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Tisk
I like the story on this one, not so the rhythm, but that is just a matter of personal preference - not criticism. All in all, a nice (and true) story, thank you!
15.12.2013 00:34:54 | Elgroth
Thats very much truth. In this case, I first wrote down a story, and then tried to rhyme it. However it became quite a challenge and I had to decide if I want to sacrifice "a bit of story" or "a bit of rhymes". I sacrificed the rhymes.
Anyway, I´m glad you like it
17.12.2013 21:09:30 | Petr Miroš
