Hope

Hope

Anotace: My first in English, please don´tjudge it too hardly :D

Nothing is as easy as it seems to be,

Not for him, not for you and definitely not for me

But there is always something you can do:

Solve the problems, pass them through.

 

The idea you just have to find,

Try to be honest, gentle and kind.

This behaviour will open people´s heart.

you have to remember life is always hard,

And you can never lose your hope!

 

Autor Ravensberg, 11.12.2013
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Tipy 2
Poslední tipující: Elgroth, Monversol
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Superb for a first take on poetry!

Just the second part seems to me a little off-beat but generally it's a delightful poem!

15.12.2013 00:17:14 | Elgroth

Thanks a lot :)

02.01.2014 14:03:59 | Ravensberg

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